Namaste Everyone,
This week for writing we have been making some changes in our writing that was called should school be a 4 day week. So firstly we had to bring up the doc but before that we needed a professional to help us because our class has never used AI before. So then Naomi came she was a AI expert. So she came in and told us to log into Papyrus AI and then when we got in we had to press a button which would take us to a conversation with Papyrus AI. Then we had to open up our writing that we had just discussed which was the should schools have a 4 day week. Then we had to type in Hi, today I am writing an argument and then it would respond. Then we would read what AI had to say and then put our opening statement and then you would send it and then it would give you some feedback on how you can improve your writing. So I will put down some pictures of the AI and me chatting about some of the things that needed a bit of a change. As you can see a bit the blue part I have said that could you please simplify which would narrow it down point by point so it could make more sense. Then the next one down is me adding the changes and then sending it to AI to see if it is good. I will add my new opening down below.
What if a day off could improve our learning and happiness??. Firstly I believe that we should have a 4 day school week because when we have a 4 day week then we get to do our homework on time.We should have a 4 day week so students can finish homework and spend more time with the family. Also the teachers get more time to plan lessons and enjoy time with family. When we have a 5 day school week most of the kids are learning but they have a short weekend to do the things they love. A 4 day week gives both students and teachers more time with schoolwork and family time. A 4 day week benefits both kids and teachers by giving them more time.
Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.
Nga Mihi – Sala:)