Tag: Writing

Writing The End For Three Little Pigs

Talofa Lava Everyone

This week for writing our teacher was reading us a story from the wolf’s point of view of the three little pigs. So people may know the different stories to the three little pigs but this was a “true story” of the three little pigs. So we have the wolf and he is trying to make  a cake for his granny but then he runs into a problem he doesn’t have any sugar and he needs a cup of sugar. So he goes to his neighbour which is all the way across some fields which he calls neighbour.

As he approached the first house he thinks to himself is this pig crazy or what who builds a house out of straw which is hay. So then he walks up to the door and knocks Mr Pig Mr are you there and then there is no answer. And by the way remember the wolf has a cold so then he HUFFS AND THEN PUFFS AND THEN SNEEZED. So when he sneezed he blew the house fell down and then in the middle of the floor was a pig flat on the ground dead.

So then he went next door to the other Pig and then she said Mr Pig Mr Pig are you in then his nose started to tickle and then he huffed and then puffed and then when he opened his eyes guess what happened the house fell down. And then when he saw some dead pig laying flat on the floor so then he marched right up to it and gobbled it. And then for the ending we had to finish it and see if we could finish the ending to see if we could  get closer to the ending of the actual TRUE STORY. And down here I will put my writing that I have done myself of the ending of the Three Little Pigs.

 

I knocked on the brick house with no answer. I called him Mr Pig Mr Pig are you in ….. Then as I waited I could feel the sneeze climbing up to my nose like a monkey climbing up to my nose. Then I felt a tickle in my nose as I wiggle my nose around to make sure I don’t sneeze. I try to look away so that my sneeze doesn’t blow the house down. And then ACHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO and then I sneezed a humongous sneeze I never knew that I could sneeze that loud and hard. Then as I looked at the brick house it was still standing just like how it was before. After I had just done that sneeze, out came Mr Pig staring at me straight in the eye like he had just seen a hurricane right in front of him but it was just my sneeze. Then I ask him if he has any sugar for my granny’s birthday cake. He says to me “I heard all of your sneezing and then when I looked outside I saw you eating up my siblings”.  And then I tell him “ They were just laying there dead on the middle of the floor so what could I do? “It was free meat laying right in front of me”. Then he slammed the door in front of me and then I asked him “ Mr Pig if you give me a cup of sugar I will leave you alone and then you can stay alive and not be eaten like your siblings”. So then I climbed through the chimney then as I was climbing down I fell into the boiling pot of soup that was just chilling above the fireplace. And then I climbed back up and then knocked on the door again and then Mr Pig answered the door. So then I politely asked him if I could have a cup of sugar for my granny. But then he said to me “ I just ran out of sugar sorry”. So we just stood there in silence then I felt hungry so I picked him up and ate him. After I finished eating Mr Pig I went back home and made my granny a sugar-less cake but I was also mindful of the situation so I added some pig ears for her. And then I gave it to her to try and she loved the pig ears so every time I look across the hills and see the brick house I thank Mr Pig for letting me have his ears for my granny’s cake.

 

BY: Sala Sotaga 😁 ( Thank you for reading my point of view as the wolf ) 

The End

Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.

Nga Mihi – Sala 🙂

Goals T3 .24

Konnichiwa Everyone,

For this week and last week we had to do something that reflects for this term and our work that we did. So firstly our teacher had to do something on some slides she told us to make a copy and we were making a copy of our goals for the term. We did this for our writing and then when we made a copy we had to do it because we had to reflect on what we did and how we can improve it. So the main subjects that my teacher wanted to cover for the goals were Writing, Reading and then the last one which is my favourite subject is Math. Why is Math my favourite subject you may ask? It is my favourite because it helps you to learn something and it gives you a challenge that you have to solve Mathematically. If you would like to see my work it will be down here for you to see. I want to be on stage 8 because I always want to try and challenge myself with something more challenging because it will help me to try and achieve it.

Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.

Nga Mihi – Sala 🙂

Suspense Narrative Story .24

Talofa Lava Everyone

For the past few months we have been working on something on the subject writing. So for this we had to read a book it is called Broken Wing. And this story is based about a grandpa and a boy they were on a tiny, little boat. So they went to a place where fog was and then the grandpa called out to the Broken Wing. So then Broken Wing came but before that when they had just entered the grandpa had said to the little boy ” It’s time you meet Broken Wing”. And then he was so excited and scared at the same time because it could be somebody so big that when he lays hands the whole city breaks but it could be something else that would be useful. And if you would like to see my work it will be down here for you to see.

Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel

Nga Mihi – Sala 🙂

Suspense Writing Beginnings .24

Talofa Lava Everyone

So this week we started writing. So for this activity our teacher gave us a slide to do and it was based around poems and how they begin. And we have worked on it for two weeks now. We call it suspense writing we have been doing this topic about suspense writing for two weeks as I mentioned before. So it is about a story called broken wing and it is about a bird called a broken wing. So we had to make up our own beginning and this is where the suspense comes in and shines. Here I will put my work that I have accomplished and I will change the setting so you can see it. And under my suspense writing will be my mood writing and then I will compare each other to see which one I like more. My favourite one is the suspense because I added more description and it sounds better. I liked how I used more better words that describe what I was doing and how. I think that my mood writing could have a little bit more description because I have used some words but I think that it could use some  more writing. And that is what I think is better and why so thank you and I want to thank. And also there is going to be a picture that AI has generated for me so it will also be down there for you to see. And I thank AI for the picture thank you AI we all appreciate the picture that you generated. Thank you.

The enormous beach was silent that sunset. The only sound was the wind and its presence.

The waves were crashing onto the sand just like the waves crashing onto each other.

Soft clouds enfolded like a person hugging you 

I can hear the laughter and giggles of my Vasa and mother from afar.

“Where are they going I want to go too ?” asked my Vasa.

This picture came from AI from a site called Adobe Firefly so I thank Firefly that you could do this for me and my class. If you would like to use it it is free so you can use it.

Thank you for reading my blog and I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.

Nga Mihi – Sala 🙂

Idioms Week4

In reading we were learning about idioms and different ways of reading an idiom. My favourite I knew was right off the bat which means doing something quickly and doing it the right way. When we were learning about idioms I learnt some new idioms that I had never heard of before. Some idioms that I learnt were Take the bull by the horns which means finding a way to deal with the argument. This activity was a fun activity to learn and discuss. In my opinion it was a bit hard figuring out which word goes with the right idiom. The aim was to get the right word into the right idiom but in the end we all discussed and found out the right word that went into the right idiom. Also in the picture there will be a yellow and blue idiom highlighted is what we have to try and use in our free writing story.

Thank you for reading my blog I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.

Nga Mihi – Sala

 

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