Talofa Lava Everyone
So this week we started writing. So for this activity our teacher gave us a slide to do and it was based around poems and how they begin. And we have worked on it for two weeks now. We call it suspense writing we have been doing this topic about suspense writing for two weeks as I mentioned before. So it is about a story called broken wing and it is about a bird called a broken wing. So we had to make up our own beginning and this is where the suspense comes in and shines. Here I will put my work that I have accomplished and I will change the setting so you can see it. And under my suspense writing will be my mood writing and then I will compare each other to see which one I like more. My favourite one is the suspense because I added more description and it sounds better. I liked how I used more better words that describe what I was doing and how. I think that my mood writing could have a little bit more description because I have used some words but I think that it could use some more writing. And that is what I think is better and why so thank you and I want to thank. And also there is going to be a picture that AI has generated for me so it will also be down there for you to see. And I thank AI for the picture thank you AI we all appreciate the picture that you generated. Thank you.
The enormous beach was silent that sunset. The only sound was the wind and its presence.
The waves were crashing onto the sand just like the waves crashing onto each other.
Soft clouds enfolded like a person hugging you
I can hear the laughter and giggles of my Vasa and mother from afar.
“Where are they going I want to go too ?” asked my Vasa.
This picture came from AI from a site called Adobe Firefly so I thank Firefly that you could do this for me and my class. If you would like to use it it is free so you can use it.
Thank you for reading my blog and I hope you have a good rest of your day and remember to spread the gospel.
Nga Mihi – Sala 🙂